Obelisk Igknight Blader

New, so all recomendations are welcome. First deck i build. Would like some advice on, if it is playable. If that is not the case, how can i make it playable?

ps. stuck between Guardian chimera, Dragon knight draco-equiste and Gilti-gearfried the magical steel knight. Also Black Luster Soldier- Soldier of chaos and Gorgon of Zilhoftonia. Also Linkmail Archfiend and Worldsea dragon zealantis. Salamangreat almiraj and Link spider. Morphing jar -2, Card trader -1, Bonfire -1, Reinforcement of the army -1. Ryko, Lightsworn hunter +3, Jar of Avarice +2.