Based on a video I saw.
Still has high chance of bricking
differences:
Includes the windwitch engine for stall (Wind pegasus into crystal wing synchro dragon)
2x Kaiju to remove annoying negates (which you can later remove using zaborg)
3x Sauravis for handtrap protection
2x handtrap (ash and imperm.)
Monarch combo: Use edea and sp.summon eidos. Tribute summon zaborg and remove necessary components for the Z-arc and cyber darkend fusions. Remove alba and predaplant for fusion searches.
Ehther is the corner piece for the monarch combo, you can special summon kuraz (remove 2 cards) while sending prime monarch and pantheism to the gy or search for zaborg.
If bricking happens, try to search for pantheisms/send them to the gy in order to get cycle cards. if you can summon Ehther this will become easier to overcome